"Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.    Discuss both these views and give your own opinion."

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Film
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industries evolve so much into many different ways for viewers to consume easily by adapting various technologies over the
last
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few years.
Cinemas
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are no longer popular locations to enjoy because
people
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can watch
films
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using their personal devices,
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as mobile phones, tablets or laptops through the
Internet
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. Will
cinemas
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disappear completely in future? In
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essay, I will argue how the viewership patterns are changed in current days but
cinemas
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may still coexist in the future.
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of all, many
people
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own at least one personal device in developed countries,
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, the cost of an
Internet
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subscription is relatively affordable.
Film
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production companies target
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viewers as well as generate a great amount of revenue by offering the services.
For instance
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, Netflix is a very popular online video service, that has a large number of subscribers worldwide, so the production companies publish their
films
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on Netflix
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of the
cinemas
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to reach their viewers effectively. Since the subscription fees of the service are
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cheaper compared to the
cinema
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tickets,
film
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lovers not only watched their favourite
films
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on their devices
instead
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but
also
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stopped going to the
cinemas
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. On the other side, mobile phones or tablets cannot replace the experience of the
cinema
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,
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, big screens, sound systems and comfortable seats aren't available anywhere.
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, some
people
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enjoy watching at the
cinema
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since
that is
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their favourite weekend activity. While
cinema
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ticket prices are getting more expensive due to the cost of
film
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production and the higher maintenance cost of
cinema
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, traditional
film
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producers promote their
films
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at
cinemas
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more than the
Internet
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services.
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, many
cinemas
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are closing down because of the loss in the
last
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few years but some are still struggling yet trying to remain in the
film
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industry.
As a result
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,
people
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can consume
films
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over
Internet
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services which have more privacy, better time management and more affordable fees. The
cinemas
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used to be the place for
people
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to hang out before the
Internet
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. The
cinemas
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will still exist for a period of time until nobody wants to watch there.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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