A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

There are many places

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tourism

has

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a remarkable

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role in their

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.

Although

it can cause some problematic and complex

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problems

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there,

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in my point of view the

benefits

are more. In

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I try to speak about some drawbacks and

benefits

of

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and express my opinion. At

first

, as a disadvantage, it is obvious

tourism

can damage local culture. If there

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not

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distinguish laws and structures for

tourists

and even denizens, differences of cultures in various nations can make complexity problems in

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the destination

a destination

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.

Moreover

,

tourists

are annoyed by citizens because of the lack of awareness.

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, some manners are banned in

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the religious

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area

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, and doing them means offensive.

On the other hand

,

benefits

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the benefits

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of

tourism

are not deniable.

Firstly

, it can be the most important source of

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income

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in some places. I mean, if we have good knowledge of

tourists

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tourists'

tourist's

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needs and how

set

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to set

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price

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prices

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for any item, we can earn

noticeable

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a noticeable

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of

this

industry.

For instance

,

tourists

really like to pay money for new things,

such

as

foods

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food

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, tools,

places

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and places

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.

Secondly

, more peace can circulate

by

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tourism

. Travelling and being familiar with

other peer

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another peer

other peers

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with different

culture

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cultures

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,

language

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languages

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, and ceremonies

,

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can make you more sympathetic. we learn how can we live peacefully, in

this

world irrespective of our differences.

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, citizens in my little town have learned how to accept different

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without any fury. These are why I think

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the advantages

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of

tourism

are more than

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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. To sum up,

pros

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and cons come together in

tourism

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the tourism

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industry. On one hand, culture

damaging

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is a drawback of it, but

on the other hand

, good income

resource

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resources

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and spreading more peace are advantages of it. So,

benefits

are more if we can set effective and clear laws and teach them to

tourists

and denizens.