Recently you have travelled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employee. Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Discuss the issue you have encountered What do you expect the nature to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the recent incident that happened to me on one of the flights. My name is Praveenjyot Singh and my flight number was FD-23122 on 29th Oct 2022. I had some problems with my body due to which I had to go washroom every couple of minutes. My seat was in the middle of the row and I had to ask other people to give me space so that I can go to the washroom.

Moreover

, I have seen some people were

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frustrated with me and I called the flight attendant to change my seat to a corner seat.

However

, the attendant name John talked with me very rudely and denied to help me. After requesting him multiple times, he asked me to wait for a few minutes and will give me some medicine but he never came back to me. He kept ignoring me during my whole journey. I expected him to help me out because I didn't want to disturb everyone in my row. I suggest you please look into

this

matter seriously so that in future no one else can face

this

behaviour by flight attendants. I

also

have some video proof which I have shared with you anytime. Yours faithfully, Praveenjyot Singh

Submitted by praveenjyotsingh on Mon Oct 31 2022

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6 paragraphs

217 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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