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In some countries, many people choose to educate children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about whether
parents
 should send their
kids
 to
school
 for a better
education
.
However
, whether it is good for
parents
 to teach their
children
 at home is a controversial issue. My view is that sending
kids
 to
school
 has more benefits.
First
, it is obvious that
children
 should get a better
education
 at
school
. The teachers who are working at
school
 have more knowledge to teach
students
 academic subjects and more experience to help
students
 to improve their weaknesses. So it is necessary for
children
 to study at
school
.
Moreover
, a
school
 can provide
kids
 with more choices of outdoor and indoor activities, as
this
 is
also
 an important part of
education
.
For example
,
students
 can learn whatever they are interested in
such
 as basketball, football, piano and so on, which is hard for
students
 to learn at home.
Therefore
,
students
 can study well and grow up healthily at
school
.
That is
 not to say that there are no advantages to studying at home. Of course,
parents
 can spend more time with their
children
 and teach their son or daughter more carefully, while the teachers need to take care of over 15
children
 at the same time in the class. But
parents
 may not have enough knowledge to teach their
kids
 in all subjects. In summary, there are far more advantages than disadvantages of sending
children
 to
school
 due to a better
education
 environment and social environment. Meanwhile,
parents
 can take more time with their
kids
. By doing so we can make sure that schools can provide a kid with a better
education
 environment.
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