some people believe that professionals, such az doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others beilieve they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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others think there should not be any obligation for people to decide where they want to work. In
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category. To commence, most governments invest a large amount of money
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their nurturing system, from the elementary grades to the universities, and so on, they expect professional workers like doctors and engineers who are educated in
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structure to be beneficial in exchange for the investment they have done.
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graduates from governmental universities are not allowed to leave the
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as soon as they finish their studying.
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, they are asked to work for a couple of years in their territory or pay an amount of money in return for years of studying time at university.
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, the right to choose where to live and work by professionals should not be condoned. A person makes his own decision due to his own conditions and factors of a good life where to live,
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the working situation should not be restricted. If governments tend to take advantage of their own expertise in their own
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ought to provide enough job opportunities rather than limiting their life and working style.
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, enough hospitals and medical service facilities must be constructed to provide a merit working place, in spite
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large number of graduates in Medical Science. To sum up, may both groups are true about the expert workers' job issues, but In my ,opinion professionals have done their part of duty by spending many years studying and becoming a skilled person, so the responsibility of people who say skilled folks should stay in the
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where they are trained outweighs to accommodate suitable working environment for them.
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