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Plastic bags, Plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damange does plastic do to environments? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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Due to the material composition,
products
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 made of
plastics
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 as bags, reusable bottles, and wrapping papers are detrimental to the environment. Environmentalists have continued to warn the leaders of different countries regarding the damage caused by
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products
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 and urged them to take steps to control the
production
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 of
plastics
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.
This
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 essay will elaborate on the negative effects of
plastic
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products
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 and
then
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 focus on the solutions to eradicate the problem.
To begin
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 with,
plastic
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's chemical compositions make it hard to rot with time. It remains the same as
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 time day after day, month after month.
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, it clogs water bodies and causes flooding in city areas.
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,
plastic
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products
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 are often thrown into ponds, rivers, and oceans. Fishes and other water creatures eat these
plastics
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 which caused their death due to contamination.
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, dead dolphins are now found on the shores of Cox's Bazar now and
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 which is really disturbing for the ecosystem. In order to reduce the damage caused by
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products
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, Governments, as well as individuals, must take the initiatives to be one team.
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, individuals should start using alternative
products
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instead
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 of
plastic
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 bags, bottles, packaging and so on.
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, jute or paper-made bags can be used for carrying groceries and bottles can be recycled or used several times.
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, Government should impose laws against
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production
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the production
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 of
plastics
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. They can ban the general use of
plastics
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 in day-to-day life which eventually will decrease the usage of
plastic
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products
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.
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, special incentives can be given by authorities for recycling
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products
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 and promoting
plastic
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 alternative
products
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 i.e. jute, paper etc. and awareness programs can be initiated targeting general people. To conclude,
plastic
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products
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 are hazardous to the environment due to their chemical compound not being bio-friendly and the government should take legal steps to ban or reduce
plastic
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production
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. Individuals, too, have a responsibility towards the environment and stop using
plastic
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products
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 in their everyday life.

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