In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Alongside the development of industries, climate change makes the earth less ideal to live on. Some people,
therefore
, suggest investing more in the field of astronomy to find alternative Linking Words
planets
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This
may be true, but I believe Linking Words
this
is not the only way to save our future. On the one hand, finding other Linking Words
planets
to live on is a good idea. Use synonyms
Firstly
, many limited natural Linking Words
resources
are many limited natural Use synonyms
resources
that are over-exploited nowadays. Once these Use synonyms
resources
are no longer available, we will have been lacking fossil fuels, Use synonyms
such
as charcoal or petroleum. Industrial and daily activities are considerably dependent on them, so it is necessary to start to find new Linking Words
planets
that have these Use synonyms
resources
to exploit or even live in. Use synonyms
Secondly
, setting a goal of settling down on a new planet can force astronomy to grow faster. Becoming learned in the field, the scientists will figure out new places to live and other innovations, exploit the energy of the stars, and communicate with the aliens to exchange universal knowledge, Linking Words
for example
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On the other hand
, the discovery of new Linking Words
planets
should not be the only solution for our future. The first reason is that Use synonyms
although
we are facing environmental problems, degradation is a long-term process. Linking Words
Therefore
, we still have enough time if we take action now to reduce the pollution on the earth. Linking Words
Moreover
, the cost of researching new Linking Words
planets
is much higher than protecting and regenerating the old ones. Space shifts, research projects, and astronaut training fees will consume a great deal of revenue from the government. In conclusion, it is necessary to research new Use synonyms
planets
. Use synonyms
However
, the regeneration of the earth's environment is Linking Words
also
a promising answer to the future living places question.Linking Words
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