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Student perform better in school when they are reworded rather than punished. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

#student #school
It is true that if
students
 take more  recompense
instead
 of  punishment and
then
 it would help
student
’s
mind
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 to be more
positively
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 work and
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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 may be way more active in the
lessens
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lessons
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. I
more
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apply
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agree
to
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this
 view and think that
give
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a
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apply
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more prises to
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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 for their activities to be better in classes is more beneficial rather than
punish
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punishing
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 them.
First
 of all, I believe that
reword
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 the
student
 are
much
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a much
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 better way to encourage them to do better work
into
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in
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the
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apply
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school.
In other words
, if government separate some amount of
prises
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prices
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 for schoolboys and they might give that thing  when
students
to be
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are
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active
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the active
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 duration of
lesson
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the lesson
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, and
then
,
as a result
 of
this
 thing some kind
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of motivational
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motivational
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motivation
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and
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interests
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interest
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 emerge inside
students’
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students
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 feeling.
For example
, In
Chinese
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a Chinese
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 country,
teacher
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the teacher
a teacher
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 put
the
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an
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 award for
student
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the student
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 and
first
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the first
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student
 who solve all questions after he or she
accept
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accepts
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 himself or
herself
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her
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 own price, as a consequence  of
this things
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this thing
these things
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 all of the
students
 try to be
first
to
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apply
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the 
next
  time.
Thus
,
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the teacher
a teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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 should set up
these kind
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this kind
these kinds
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 of strategies to encourage
students
.
On the other hand
,
to punish
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punishing
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students
 might be wisely option.
That is
 to say, only some kind of condition,
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the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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 need to punish pupils when they feel
some
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apply
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brag
with
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about
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himself
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his
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 or herself
knowledge
,
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 because if  
students
 keep at it like
this
after
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apply
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all of
his
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apply
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or
her
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their
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knowledge
 might be
reduce
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reduced
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. For
this
 reason, when they feel satisfied with their
knowledge
 after their understanding
start
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decrease
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. Take
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the Uzbekistan
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Uzbekistan
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Uzbekistan's
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 teaching system as an example, in there,
teacher
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teachers
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 punish
students
 when they do not
hometask
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home task
 or given tasks
,
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apply
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 because  for their
knowledge
 to be excellent.
Therefore
, teachers’ punishment may be worth it for pupils' future. To conclude, I strongly believe that
rewords
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 may be
much
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a much
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 better way to good performance in
the
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apply
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class, but  teachers
need
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 punish
pupil
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pupils
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 when they feel boast
with
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about
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 their
knowledge
.
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