Some people think that all TV entertainment programs should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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that entire television channels

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to entertaining

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society. The essay will disagree about

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entertaining show may force watchers to switch to other channels or even turn off the television.

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can not be the priority topic that any television company wants to implement.

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that children are likely to watch. Due to the

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of contents, it hardly combines some serious social arguments into

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entertainment

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inappropriate topics with their shows. In conclusion, taking any social comments into a

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program that all aged of people can watch should consider whether the issue is relevant to

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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