Some people think that it is good to be ambitious. How important is it to be ambitious? Do you think it's a good characteristic?

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say that the best

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, but positive,

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has pluses and minuses

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blinds empathy and responds to selfish conduct.

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essay will explain my view as well as

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of being an ambitious person.

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think it's good to be ambitious at the moment

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because right now

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understand being kind to them. For

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example, if someone politely asks something,

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everyone is moody and when their mood

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, so now many

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think that

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selfish is a good characteristic.

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, an ambitious person can allow himself a lot of things, love himself and take care of himself. Be confident that

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other girls, as rivals and don'

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dress up for guys because love yourself.

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firmly believe that

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ambition

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is a good personality for an individual because it enables

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have great performance at work. For

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employers prefer employees who have

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when they apply for hard work, and

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they would dedicate themselves overcome difficult

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or exceed the aims of

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company.

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, in

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character

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selfish

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attitude towards

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, there are

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who only think they other

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interesting. As an ambitious person usually

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as more productive, it

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reflects one confidence and insight

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the future.

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ambition

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with vision. In conclusion,

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think that

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is a good

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because. I have

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a lot of

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characteristic

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life is the best.

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, with

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character

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, can achieve success.