Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

A large number of foods and drinks, which have been manufactured in the factories, have significant amounts of sugar, that are not healthy at all. There is an idea that said that the cost of these

products

should be higher to prevent customers to purchase fewer sugar

products

. I partly agree with

this

solution, and I will explain my reasons in the following essay. These days, most of the people who live in the cities, have nine-to-five jobs and they are stuck behind their desks during the daytime

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at night they tend to sit in front of their TV or do some activities, which do not need physical activities.

Also

, we can see

this

pattern in the children's lifestyle; they play some games, which do not needs special body movements. In

this

passive lifestyle, they drink and eat

high-sugar

products

every day, which has negative impacts on their health.

Therefore

, increasing the

prices

of these sorts of goods can reduce their usage; because large amounts of these

high-sugar

products

are not the main part of daily meals.

For instance

, drinking sweet drinking with lunch or dinner like coca cola, is not necessary for families and improving the

prices

will reduce their purchases and a significant number of them would buy these things only on special occasions.

On the other hand

, we should notice that the market of

high-sugar

manufacturing

products

not only belongs to middle and high-economic state people but

also

poor families.

Hence

, by uprising the

prices

, they will be affected by

this

strategy too. Imagine a poor family with two little children, whose only pleasure during the day is drinking

high-sugar

chocolate milk for their breakfast, which they buy from supermarkets. By increasing the

prices

, they lose their breakfast and other things would not bring

this

enjoyment to them. In conclusion,

although

increasing the

prices

of unhealthy

products

, which are full of sugar will decrease the purchasing rate, I believe that

this

solution will have some negative impacts on

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lives, who are not rich.