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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as posssible,while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are different opinions about the importance of formal education for children . While some argue that school ought
to begin
 under 7 years old,others claim that after 7 years of age are more important. I, on my part, believe that offspring should go later because they should be free. To commence with the view on the former group, there are two reasons behind their position.
First
 is that pretty trick start learn, the better their intelligence will be.
That is
, people give their kids earlier they will be intelligent.
For instance
, my father when he was six years old, dad was sent to school.
In addition
 to
this
, If people begin to teach offspring
first
, they will motivate as they aim to get the best scores.
Thus
, he will start his career earlier than the same age. Definitely, others arguments exist too, but the ones mentioned, I believe, do stand out. Turning to the latter group's point of view, they
also
 have their own grounds to justify the position they hold.
First
 of all, the educational system should start from the determined age which with identified by the government officials.
For example
, some children could lose their childhood and begin to be closed posters for communication. The availability of other arguments is undeniable, but mentioning them is not worthy. In conclusion,
although
 the opinions of people regarding whether offspring should go to school early vary, I am convinced that childhood is most important in our life,
thus
, I believe that every kid can choose their way.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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