We have three important parts of education: reading, writing and math. Some people think every child will benefit from a fourth skill added to the list: computer skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education is a matter of constant concern in all countries. Some
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think that except for basic
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like reading, writing and math,
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will get more benefits when they have more computer
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. In my opinion, I completely agree with the above opinion. Some
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think that
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should only focus on
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like literacy and numeracy because it is the three most important
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for every human. Adding a new skill will result in an extra burden on
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. If they have to learn a new skill, they will not have enough time to relax, which will affect their physical health. Especially, exposing
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to computers early is
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not good for them without control
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parents.
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, the use of technology is becoming a very important part of our life. Technology is always present
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and
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cannot live without technology.
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, nowadays, it is easy for students to find different kinds of information about the subject on the latest digital devices to help them easily grasp the lesson and help them to expand their relationships on these devices. If students are exposed to computers at a very young age, they will have a better understanding of how these things work. Which would result in
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in the future. In conclusion,
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there are some disadvantages, the benefits it brings outweigh the limitations. I believe that it is absolutely necessary for every student to develop in their primary years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital age
  • tech-savvy
  • curriculum
  • digital literacy
  • programming
  • coding
  • disseminated
  • digital divide
  • opportunities
  • neglected
  • creativity
  • problem-solving skills
  • navigate
  • manipulate
  • environments
  • excessive focus
  • physical inactivity
  • interpersonal skills
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