Write a letter to your friend and tell the disadvantages of camping
Dear Param,
Hope you are doing well. Yesterday I received your letter, I was so happy to hear from you after so long. As you have mentioned about your plan of visiting Lonavala for camping, I know that you will enjoy it a lot as you are an adventurous person and love exploring places which are close to nature.
Understanding your plan, I want to advise you on your trip by mentioning the demerits of camping.
So, the
first
one is that you can easily catch infections from insect bites, so carry ointments in advance. Also
, it gets very cold over there at night, so I advise you to carry some medicines and warm clothes with you. Additionally
, carry raincoats and slip-proof footwear because you can experience nonstop rain over there. So, considering the above issues, don’t miss out on a single thing mentioned above.
I know that you so want me to join you, but I am swamped these days because of my inclusion in more than 2 projects. So, I apologize for not joining you on the trip, but I know you will understand my situation. Also
, make sure to click beautiful pictures and post them to me.
Hoping you have the best trip of your life and don’t forget to write me back along with your pictures.
Regards and Lots of love
Manpreet KaurSubmitted by puneetpalsinghsidhu on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite