In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

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role in
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contemporary Era. There for the reason in few Nations folk gives much Momentous to owning a home rather than renting
one
.There are plethora
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for
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such
a situation. And I strongly believe
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development. So both aspects will be discussed in the
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paragraphs. To commence with ; discussing the reasons, the
first
and foremost reason is that if a
person
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own
house
so it can not only gives peace but
also
immense joy.
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person
can
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their Abode by his choice.
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it
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such
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as
,
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many
of
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times we have been observing that after
one
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finish
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, so they have to transfer all household items from
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of
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. Apart from that,
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another
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reason is that in many culture plethora
person
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person
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of money in renting. So, it indicates that they are not
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wealthy. For instance, in India parents visit the
house
for looking probable match for their daughter's marriage and mostly they do not prefer who has been paying rent.
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of people try to own
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instead
of renting
one
. Moving ahead, I consider
that is
a definitely beneficial development because
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it is
one
type of investment for the future. Which will be helpful not only nasty time but
also
in retirement life.
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a
person
who
buying
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a
house
in
a
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20
millions
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in
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his
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younger age and after 30 years
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he would sell so he will get almost
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amount of money.
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,
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long-term
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. To conclude, it can be said that
although
when the
person
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try
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to become
owner
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of
house
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, it might
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but
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that will be helped in
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future as
a
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investment. So
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as well as the family
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better life in
a
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retirement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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