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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

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is
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 role in
this
 contemporary Era. There for the reason in few Nations folk gives much Momentous to owning a home rather than renting
one
.There are plethora
reasons
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the
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such
 a situation. And I strongly believe
that is
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 development. So both aspects will be discussed in the
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 paragraphs. To commence with ; discussing the reasons, the
first
 and foremost reason is that if a
person
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 own
house
 so it can not only gives peace but
also
 immense joy.
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that
person
 can
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 their Abode by his choice.
Moreover
,
one
 problem
it
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can
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such
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as
,
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 many
of
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times we have been observing that after
one
 year period of time,when
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finish
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, so they have to transfer all household items from
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other end
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 of
area
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. Apart from that,
the
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another
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 reason is that in many culture plethora
person
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person
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 of money in renting. So, it indicates that they are not
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wealthy. For instance, in India parents visit the
house
 for looking probable match for their daughter's marriage and mostly they do not prefer who has been paying rent.
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 of people try to own
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instead
 of renting
one
. Moving ahead, I consider
that is
 a definitely beneficial development because
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it is
one
 type of investment for the future. Which will be helpful not only nasty time but
also
 in retirement life.
For
example
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 a
person
 who
buying
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 a
house
 in
a
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20
millions
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in
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his
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 younger age and after 30 years
these same abode
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this same abode
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 he would sell so he will get almost
two fold
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 amount of money.
Hence
,
this
 approach is
a
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beneficial in
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long-term
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. To conclude, it can be said that
although
 when the
person
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try
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 to become
owner
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the owner
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 of
house
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the house
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, it might
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but
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that will be helped in
a
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 future as
a
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 investment. So
individual
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 as well as the family
living
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 better life in
a
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retirement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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