news plays an important part of most people's lives. why news so important to people?why is so much news dedicated to bad news?sould the news focus on good news instead?

Human beings have always been interested in what is happening
on
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their surroundings.
News
plays a critical role in a lot of
individual’s
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lives
. In my opinion,
news
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is very crucial in some
people
’s
lives
and a tremendous amount of
news
are
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specified
to
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bad
news
for some
reasons
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,and I believe that the
media
should focus more on satisfying
news
.
News
has been
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part
of some
people
’s
lives
for some reasons.
Firstly
, since the Homo Sapiens have evolved, gossip has been an inseparable
part
of human being’s life .
For example
, our ancestors used to sit around the fire and talk and communicate about their day and what they faced.By no means can it be eliminated from our characteristics , so
people
are really enthusiastic about what is happening
around
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,which can be conceivable throughout the
media
and
news
.
Secondly
,
people
are able to access the latest
news
in different genres
that is
happening in their society and around the world, which will give them a sense of belonging to a bigger group ,so they feel connected to society through
news
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.
Therefore
, most
of
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people
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find
news
a very indispensable
part
of their
lives
. A huge amount of
news
are
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dedicated to unpleasant events for some
reasons
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and
media
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should consider good
news
as much as unpleasant ones. The
first
one
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reason is that
the
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bad
news
are
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more controversial and can attract more readers and audiences. Having been an extremely sociable creature,
people
adore discussing
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subjects that
brings
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a lot of
controversy
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and provide the opportunity to have a deep conversation.
For example
, there could be
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opinions and endless conversations about a probable war or a viable crisis.
Moreover
, looking at the history of our ancestors,as they always were in danger of arduous circumstances and tried so hard to survive, anxiety and stress
has
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become a
part
of our unconscious mind ,and
people
are addicted to
hear
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bad
news
, which makes bad
news
very appealing to most of
people
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,and
media
is aware of
this
aspect and use it to improve their marketing.
However
,
media
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should concentrate on broadcasting good
news
instead
to bring
positive
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ambience and zeal to
people
’s
life
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and make them more optimistic about the future.
Furthermore
, publishing good
news
will improve
people
’s mental health and it will lessen the pressure and stress
of
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their
lives
significantly.
As a result
,
news
should shift from stressful and bad
news
towards more pleasant ones. In conclusion,
news
plays a vital
part
in most
of
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people’s
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lives
. in my perception,
people
are fond of
news
since they are always curious about their surroundings ,and
media
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mostly publishes the bad
news
since the broadcasters and producers know that they are more controversial and they are aware that
people
are more into bad
news
psychologically, I think that
media
should focus on appealing
news
instead
.
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