news plays an important part of most people's lives. why news so important to people?why is so much news dedicated to bad news?sould the news focus on good news instead?

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Human beings have always been interested in what is happening
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their surroundings.
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plays a critical role in a lot of
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lives
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. In my opinion,
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news
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is very crucial in some
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people
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and a tremendous amount of
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are
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specified
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bad
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for some
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,and I believe that the
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should focus more on satisfying
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has been
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part
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of some
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people
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for some reasons.
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, since the Homo Sapiens have evolved, gossip has been an inseparable
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of human being’s life .
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, our ancestors used to sit around the fire and talk and communicate about their day and what they faced.By no means can it be eliminated from our characteristics , so
people
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are really enthusiastic about what is happening
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,which can be conceivable throughout the
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and
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.
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,
people
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are able to access the latest
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in different genres
that is
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happening in their society and around the world, which will give them a sense of belonging to a bigger group ,so they feel connected to society through
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news
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.
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, most
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people
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the people
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find
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a very indispensable
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of their
lives
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. A huge amount of
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are
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dedicated to unpleasant events for some
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and
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should consider good
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as much as unpleasant ones. The
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reason is that
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bad
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are
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more controversial and can attract more readers and audiences. Having been an extremely sociable creature,
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adore discussing
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subjects that
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a lot of
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and provide the opportunity to have a deep conversation.
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, there could be
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opinions and endless conversations about a probable war or a viable crisis.
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, looking at the history of our ancestors,as they always were in danger of arduous circumstances and tried so hard to survive, anxiety and stress
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become a
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of our unconscious mind ,and
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are addicted to
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bad
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, which makes bad
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very appealing to most of
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people
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the people
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,and
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is aware of
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aspect and use it to improve their marketing.
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,
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media
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the media
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should concentrate on broadcasting good
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instead
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to bring
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a positive
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ambience and zeal to
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people
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’s
life
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and make them more optimistic about the future.
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, publishing good
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will improve
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people
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’s mental health and it will lessen the pressure and stress
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their
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significantly.
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,
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should shift from stressful and bad
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towards more pleasant ones. In conclusion,
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plays a vital
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in most
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people’s
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lives
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. in my perception,
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are fond of
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since they are always curious about their surroundings ,and
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mostly publishes the bad
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since the broadcasters and producers know that they are more controversial and they are aware that
people
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are more into bad
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psychologically, I think that
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should focus on appealing
news
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instead
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