You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next

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Dear John, I am writing to thank you for inviting me to your new house, and I had a great time staying with you and your family. The spacious backyard with various flora gardens is a magnificent spot in your house, and I like it so much.
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, diverse cutting-edge technological kitchen appliances,
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as modern steam ovens,
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draw my attention because I am fond of fancy cooking equipment. All your homemade delicate cookies and cupcakes fully satisfied my appetite, so I enjoyed your cuisine so delightly.
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, reuniting with our old colleagues in your townhouse offers me a sense of familiarity because it reminded me of how collaborative we were in our previous office.
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month is my birthday and I cordially invite you and our friends to join my birthday party. Hopefully, you can leave a vacant time for
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spot for me since I want to prepare my hometown's traditional dishes to treat you.
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, I will
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arrange some bottles of delicious wines to celebrate
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memorable day. I look forward to hearing your reply and kindly give me a response by
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Friday. Warms regards, Claire
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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