Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many companies promote their new
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by advertising with famous stars, which generates significant revenues for them. Many
advertisements
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attract
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to buy new
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,
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, promotional discounts are often included. Do those
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provide benefits for us? In
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essay, I will discuss both the good and bad implications of buying based on
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.
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of all, some
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love new
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and discounts,
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, they cannot decide which
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to buy without reading reviews or
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.
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, many companies spend their money on advertising, so that information is reached widely. When new
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are released in the market, some
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are quite interested to try and become part of the trends.
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, new iPhone 14 is released by Apple, many
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decided to buy it right after seeing the advertisement of how durable the phone is.
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, some
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just buy the new
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without thinking much.
On the other hand
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, there are too many
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which confuse many consumers with fake reviews and multiple promotions. While some
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just bought the product only when they need them, whereas some just bought it without thinking.
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, there're
people
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waiting for good promotions, so they often found them in some
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. In
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cases, those
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are useful for some
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as fulfilling their demands. But there are many fake
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, some
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just become victims of the scam as they bought without seeing the actual product,
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, clothes in the wrong sizes, untested kitchen equipment and fake branded electronics. The awareness of those fake
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is still lacking, so
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should read the reviews and find out more about the sellers before making the decision, not just by
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. In conclusion, I believe some
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are great but
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shouldn't buy immediately without learning about the
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and whether they really need them or not. Since I enjoy online shopping a lot, I subscribed to
advertisements
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by email and I decide carefully with extra caution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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