Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your letter, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together
Hi Xiaofei,
I just realized that you've asked me for advice about learning a new
sport
. I want to take a moment and introduce a new sport
that might be suitable for you to learn.
I think playing badminton is a very good choice for you. The Badminton set is not quite expensive compared to most sports equipment. It can help to maintain a positive mindset and increase concentration levels.
From my experience of learning a new sport
, you can start learning it by watching some related videos on YouTube. After you have a basic understanding of this
sport
, you can join a badminton group in Toronto downtown and try to practice it with members of that group.
I'm also
interested in this
sport
, so we can learn it together. If you're available on Friday night, you can come to my apartment. There is a gym in my condo and we can play it together!
Best regards,
LinglingSubmitted by linglinglin070 on
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