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Some people believe that now a days we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

#people #choices
It is often thought that at present a person has various options to choose
.
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 In my opinion, I agree that
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individuals
indivuduals
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individuals
 have choices in their student life as well as in
job
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the job
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 sector.
However
, I
also
 believe that so many varieties of selection make
people
 confuse
to
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 take the proper
decision
.
To begin
 with, earlier maximum universities did not have too many
subject
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 for
studies
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study
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.
For example
, two ago even in big varsities of Bangladesh Bangle, English, Economics, Physics etc. basic subjects are
studies
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. But, now at the time of taking admission students
get
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 huge opportunities
of
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 selection according to the need of the modern world. Apart from
this
, doing a
job
 is
also
 become very easy, as
people
 can select a
job
 depending on their
demand
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.
For instance
, some
people
 like to work in day shift whereas others love to do it at night which helps in their time management.
Besides
, diversion in
job
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the job
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also
 helps in the development of a nation because it
also
evaluate
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 new thought.
Such
 as, the IT sector of India is developing rapidly and a big portion of the young generation are
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getting
geeting
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seeking
 opportunities to apply their thought by working here.
On the contrary
, finding different options to take a
job
 can create
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problem
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 to select the proper
decision
, which is a serious issue at present, because it makes
people
 confuse to judge the right one. To illustrate,
people
 do not apply for
the
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job
 which is beneficial to them
in the long run
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, in the long run,
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 they may make
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a decision
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decision
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decisions
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 thinking about the present situation of the circumstances. In conclusion, it can be said that though men have so many facilities to choose
but
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, they need to focus deeply when
select
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selecting
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 one for avoiding any kind of wrong
decision
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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