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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular reader of your newspaper called " The Country", the articles published in
this
 newspaper are informative and interesting. I just read an article which you published
last
 week November 6, 2022, about the metropolis centres of AB, Canada. Being a native resident and a travel blogger, I don't agree with some points you mentioned.
Although
, some information you provided is accurate.
Firstly
, the shape of town centres, yes the architecture of most towns is square or rectangular.
Also
, every township centre has the same designed transit centre,
this
 is because every transit centre presents the cultural and multicultural values of the province. Its shows, how
this
 country is welcoming for all the immigrants who want to settle here. Moving on to the points, where I quite disagree with you is the colour coding scheme and the same designed churches and temples. We have different painted houses and designs ,not all the houses are the same
although
 every house has different square feet. Whereas, every church and temple has a different outlooks church. For ,example there is the largest church in a city called Pehu, have a big fountain and a large park. Being a blogger, I would like to provide to guide tour as I often visit different cities so often to write about them and changes made in cities. I can provide you with brief details about our country and culture. Thanks and Regards ABC
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