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Dear friend, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter to recommend you a good place to visit in my city. So there is a
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in
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the west side of the city named “West Edmonton
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,” and it is one of the biggest in North America. It is a great place to visit because it has almost all the branded cloth shops where you can shop for yourself,
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there are tons of activities to do
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as water sports, skating, playing games, and a food court to eat.
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, the layout design of the
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is fascinating in itself. I would
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suggest if you
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to visit there, try to go early in the morning because the
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is very big in size and it would take you almost one full day to explore all the attractions. Apart from that, keep a bottle of water to hydrate yourself because you have to walk a lot to explore everything in the
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. Yours friendly, Gurwinder Singh
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider using more linking words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your paragraphs each focus on a single main idea or aspect of your recommendation to enhance clarity.
task achievement
For a complete task response, consider adding more details about why you recommend this place personally. Perhaps share a personal experience or a memorable aspect that might intrigue your friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are very polite and friendly, establishing a warm tone.
task achievement
The writing tone throughout the letter is suitable for a personal recommendation to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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