Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are two views many
people
believe that promotions are not good as we have to buy
goods
that we do not have any need that and
also
others are against
this
topic and they have beliefs we can get a lot of information by watching advertising. I strongly believe that
this
is a good approach and
this
can help us for choosing the good product that we need it.
this
. the essay will check both views in continuing. There are many reasons for the benefits of advertising. every day we can see a lot of new products that we do not know anything about them,
furthermore
. we should collect information about their advantages or disadvantages but
media
is a good way until we can learn about devices' efficiency and
this
is one of the most important tips that are related to advertising.
for example
. previous of these
media
we should know about using of a different device by themselves but nowadays
this
is very easy through of
media
.
In contrast
, sometimes
people
noticed that advertising is not completely true. there are many
goods
in the world that have many differences in the description in comparison same products that we can see in the different types of
media
.
in addition
,
this
leads
people
not to want to trust
this
advertising. actually, not only
this
will lead
people
to become unsatisfaction but
also
want to ignore these promotions,
for instance
, in my country
people
spend a lot of time in order watching advertising but they are not successful in their choice of buying their
goods
. In conclusion, I firmly believe that advertising is a good technology for
people
who want to know much about the
goods
information.
besides
, companies should consider not any difference between
goods
in promotions and real
goods
.
people
should check
goods
very accurately and after that, they should buy them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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