Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products any ware in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?
Globalization led to some changes in society. One of them is easy accessibility to the same product in the world.
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advancement
causes
nations Use synonyms
are
like one other more and more. Change the verb form
to be
Although
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initially
a positive development, it is a negative Linking Words
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improvement
improvment
both for today and for the future.
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improvement
First
of all, when Linking Words
countries
are becoming more and more similar, they lose their Use synonyms
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identity
identitiy
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identity
Then
they may even assimilate. Linking Words
Moreover
, producing products everywhere Linking Words
causes
local products to be ignored. Use synonyms
For example
, in Linking Words
countries
on the Use synonyms
african
continent, the new generation does not know their old Change the capitalization
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tradition
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traditional
goods
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such
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ethnic
ethnich
skirts, different hats or wooden slippers. Correct your spelling
ethnic
Moreover
, most children only know western clothing.
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Secondly
, because people have access to the same Linking Words
goods
wherever they are sold throughout the world, it may be Use synonyms
the
decrease in cultural diversity, as Correct article usage
a
countries
all around the world are becoming alike. All Use synonyms
countries
have local products of their own. Use synonyms
However
, if these Linking Words
goods
are manufactured by global companies, they lose Use synonyms
their
not only monetary value both Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
moral value. Linking Words
For instance
, the homeland of sushi is Japan. Linking Words
However
, when Linking Words
traveling
, it is simple to view and consume sushi abroad. Change the spelling
travelling
This
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situation
situaiton
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situation
causes
decreasing value.
In conclusion, because consumers may purchase the same Use synonyms
goods
everywhere in the globe, Use synonyms
countries
are becoming more and more similar. It is a detrimental development because it Use synonyms
causes
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losing
their Replace the word
loss
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identity
identitiy
, Correct your spelling
identity
decline
in cultural diversity and assimilation. Add an article
the decline
a decline
Furthermore
, it is predictable that the similarity between nations will increase Linking Words
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over time
overtime
due to globalization.Correct your spelling
over time
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