IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

You recently discovered that there are plans to construct a new block of flats in your local area. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter: ·  explain how you know about the plans ·  describe the negative effects this will have on your neighbourhood ·  suggest a possible solution to the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the construction of a new block which is being planned in our locality. I came across
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 news yesterday
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 reading a newspaper and was not delighted as it would make all parents and children unhappy in the local area. The reason is that it is their go-to place for recreational activities
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 as walking, playing, and gossiping. The construction of
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 building requires the demolition of the present playground in that particular area which is a dedicated space for children and grandparents, and its removal would make their lives boring since they will have to go out of town just for playing games which was possible in the city before.
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 problem can be solved, if you may consider other locations for the construction so that locality members do not get affected by the change and continue to live their lives happily. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sakshi Syal

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Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear and single idea to enhance readability.
Task Achievement
Ensure the letter fully addresses all parts of the task in depth for a higher score.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear logical structure with a defined introduction, body, and conclusion.
Task Achievement
You used an appropriate tone for a formal letter addressing a local authority.
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