Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Increasingly, the world is becoming more connected each day, and certain
people
believe that its development can create a world of only one culture and destroy national identity. In fact, globalism has been changing society's beliefs, so I'd like to bring up some information to discuss through
this
essay.
First
of all, there are many ways to agree or not about
this
topic,
however
, I'm going to explain some disagreement articles to support it. According to the article written by a businessman who has an important international company in the travel market said,
people
have been more interested in visiting and learning more about new cultures
such
as religions, customs, and typical foods, and so, that's why individuals are investing a lot of money travelling and not only saving money in banks as well.
For example
, youth
people
prefer taking a trip worldwide
instead
of working to build goods. Still,
although
many individuals are going to other countries and back, the main cultural point hasn't been affected and each nation maintains its habits. Honestly, the internet has the power of connecting all folks on the same platform using only one technological device through apps
such
as
,
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Facebook, Instagram, Whatsapp, google, and so. Indeed, it proves
that is
not necessary to travel to others continents for being in touch with new experiences.
For instance
, I've been to Canada on my
last
travel and there my wife and I had the experience to join the Christmas celebration with
people
from other places,
such
as Asia, China, India, and so.
Then
, the conversation was respectful and important for our development. In conclusion, I learned that the world has been constantly changing and society's role is to respect and try to gain more pieces knowledge as possible.
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