Education is a important factor for development of a country but other hold the opposite view. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Recently, in today's world ,completing studies and holding a certain level of knowledge is becoming mandatory for every individual .

Also

, it is a status symbol.literacy plays a vital role in the progress of a nation in various aspects but it is not only a factor.

Thus

, some people show contrasting

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.Personally, I firmly believe that education is an uplifting area for the

country

itself , and with

this

,I will be showing my opinion

further

.

To begin

with, India is a developing

country

with a population leading to a place in the top 5 populated countries.Citizens of

this

specific

country

when given a chance to become fully literate and pursue their desired careers can create a developed outcome.Highly educated staff in a company contributes to a promoting environment

this

,results of work become prominent.

For instance

, nations like the USA

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literacy rates than the various countries around the world so,it has become the

first

developed

country

and more to encounter in future.

On the other hand

, there are various reasons for a

country

to be fully developed.

However

, residents always have controversial thoughts.In my perception, one of the main reasons is the downgrading economy. A province with all the developed facilities and job placements can encourage a certain amount of age groups to study and take place in the growth process of a whole nation. A good illustration is taking a note from a small state in India, with no work security

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then

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to illiteracy. In conclusion, educating a

country

is beneficial for its development whereas more major factors must be taken into consideration in order to become a fully grown nation.