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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.

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There is no doubt that updated knowledge is as precious as gold.
Although
 some people believe that part of the up-to-date data is not sharable, I would argue that it is beneficial to share as much as possible recent scientific outbreaks. On the one hand, those who believe that some research material is too major to be shared may argue that it can be harmful in the hand of the opposing political parties. The reason for
this
 is that
such
 intelligence can create dangerous threats internationally.
For example
, counter-sided countries like the United States and Russia often work on weaponised research programs, but a leak or data sharing can lead to new dangerous weapons that will
consequently
 affect either or both sides.
In contrast
, if
this
 magnificent information is not shared between opposing nations, the world would be a much safer place.
On the other hand
, my view is that
this
 information should be shared because it can help upgrade the development wheel.
This
 is because some statistics between academic scientists can help produce new state-of-the-art machines, treatments, and solutions. To illustrate, new studies about dental materials like SDR and Bulk-Fill can help spread more accurate, precise treatment modalities, and yet can be upgraded and modified when shared between every interested researcher.
However
, if they did not offer these updated studies, treatments may vary all over the world and the best outcomes resulting from these scientific papers may not be thought In conclusion, despite the danger of sharing some data, I strongly believe that the positive outcomes of publishing it would outweigh the negatives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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