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Many of the products we buy nowadays break or wear out very quickly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for manufactures and the public?

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It is undeniable that most consumer goods used to
last
 longer in the past, not only for the current popularity of disposable
products
 but
also
 due to the lower
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average
avarage
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average
 quality found
on
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 goods nowadays. There are
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numerous
inumerous
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numerous
 advantages and disadvantages caused by
this
 trend and it is not always the same for
manufacturers
 and the public.
For example
, the possibility of offering a lower price is a positive effect for both sides,
however
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 the
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rapidly
rapid
rapidy
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rapid
 velocity that the product breaks is better for the
manufacturers
 and worst for the public. In the past,
products
 used to be made with much more
resistent
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resistant
resistance
 materials and that would
consequently
 increase the lifetime of it but at the same time would increase
its
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their
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 costs. So, there is a clear
advantage
 of the way
products
 are made nowadays, the material is not as
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resistant
resistent
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resistant
, but it
allow
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manufacturers
 to reduce the production cost and
that is
 reflected
on
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selling
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the selling
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 price. That brings an
advantage
 for the public that could have more access to the item and
also
 to the
manufacturers
 that could sell more. On another hand, the reduction
of
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selling
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 price is just a
short term
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advantage
 for the public given that the faster the product breaks the faster it would have to be
repleaced
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replaced
. In that
case
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 the public would have a disadvantage by being
oblide
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oblige
obliged
 to buy a new item while the
manufacturers
 would have an
advantage
 by increasing
its
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their
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 sales. To conclude, it is
undoutable
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undeniable
 that the faster life cycle of
products
 nowadays can create positive and negative impacts for the public and
manufacturers
,
however
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 if it is well managed
the
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society could see even a
further
advantage
 with more economic
moviments
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movements
 there could be faster
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technological
tecnological
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technological
 advances, more
employments
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employment
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 and economic growth.
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