The practice of illegally hunting wild animals continues to cause concern in many countries, particularly developing countries. What are the causes of such hunting? What are the effects on the animals, and on the wider human society in these countries and beyond?

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Poaching is a phenomenon with a variety of causes, both commercial and cultural. The effects can be extremely serious for animals and the community, as we will discuss now. Possibly the most common cause of people turning to
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is the profit which can be made from animal materials. We see
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in the high prices attached to illegal ivory, furs and hides, which are highly sought after by a small but wealthy group of unscrupulous global collectors. In turn, these prices may be the result of novelty or rarity value
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or connected to imaginary medicinal properties,
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in the illegal trade for bear and gorilla body parts. A secondary cause is
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more basic pressure of hunting for food, which forces some local people to kill animals purely for meat. The roots of
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tend to be in localized famine or drought, or in political instability which disrupts the food supply, as we see in central Africa currently. Turning to the effects of poaching, the most serious is the threat of extinction posed to species which are already rare or endangered because of habitat loss or other environmental factors. The resulting consequences of extinction may include damage to the food chain and the ecosphere,
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erosion of a country’s natural heritage, which comprises its animals, landscapes and natural resources, all of which may be under pressure already. Few could doubt,
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, that Siberia would be vastly poorer without its few remaining Siberian tigers. Overall, the factors behind poaching tend to be commercial or connected to regional instability. The effects may include final extinction, with the damage to ecosystems and loss of heritage that
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Poaching
  • Endangered species
  • Biodiversity
  • Extinction
  • Ecosystem disruption
  • Conservation efforts
  • Stringent laws
  • Ecological balance
  • Impoverished communities
  • Cultural traditions
  • Rite of passage
  • Law enforcement
  • Tourism impact
  • Sustainable practices
  • Wildlife protection
  • Illegal trade
  • Population decline
  • Habitat destruction
  • Global concern
  • Ecological health
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