“Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer”

#activity #child #skills #creativity #answer”

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Children are developing rapidly. A great number of people believe that activities can improve more skills than

books

Use synonyms

.l would like to present my point of view on

this

Linking Words

topic. Spending active time with toddlers is significant for their development.

Firstly

Linking Words

, it can teach them how to control their bodies, especially

hands

Correct pronoun usage

their hands

show examples

and feet but

also

Linking Words

it is helpful for their creativity and

Correct your spelling

teamwork

show examples

team work

Correct your spelling

teamwork

show examples

For example

Linking Words

, by organising art

crafts

Correct word choice

and crafts

show examples

, parents or a babysitter are giving the opportunity for kids to create their own art, young human beings are improving

the

Change the word

their

show examples

hand movement because they need to use them to draw or paint a picture. Providing

sport

Change the noun form

sports

show examples

activities is

also

Linking Words

important because, as I have mentioned before, it is great for

Correct your spelling

teamwork

show examples

team work

Correct your spelling

teamwork

show examples

and body control.

For instance

Linking Words

, my aunt sent her kids to dance classes and it was extremely useful because they had to work with the body and music and

also

Linking Words

with other dancers,

as a result

Linking Words

, the development was complex.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, reading is

also

Linking Words

important and has a positive effect on toddlers.

Books

Use synonyms

are fantastic for everyone, despite their age.

This

Linking Words

is the reason why they should be in our lives from the very beginning.

This

Linking Words

the

Correct article usage

show examples

great source to boost imagination. The best example is my little cousin, who loves reading

books

Use synonyms

more than watching television. She herself says that it is better because she can create the world she wants in her head,

as a result

Linking Words

, she is smarter than kids her age. In conclusion, I agree that various, enjoyable activities are wonderful for developing children's skills because they can help them improve in many ways.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, I

also

Linking Words

believe that reading should be included in young people's lives because

books

Use synonyms

have power, which is significant for our brains to evolve.

Submitted by paulastb6 on Sun Nov 06 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their familles but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
It is increasingly common for families to send their elderly relatives to live in nursing homes, rather than take care of them at home. This essay will highlight some of the benefits and drawbacks that have resulted from this switch.
8
band
Some people believe the government spends too much money on space research while there are still a lot of problems on the Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to some, the millions spent annually on government-funded space projects would be better invested in addressing urgent issues on this planet. Although there are undoubtedly many problems on Earth that need tackling, I firmly believe that diverting financial resources from space exploration would be a mistake. These projects have brought, and will continue to bring, great benefits to humanity.
8
band
You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news
I hope this letter finds you in good health and best of spirits. It’s been a long time since we caught up. I am writing to inform you that I have changed my job recently. I had to quit my senior accountant job from D.C Travelers last month due to problems in my commute to the office. As you know they moved their office from Brampton to Oakville thus, it was hard for me to travel for so long every day.
7
band
In many countries, the number of animals and plant declining? Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?
It is an alarming fact that there has been a sharp decline in the number of plants and animals in many countries recently. There are many reasons for this problem to be the case, but also a lot of solutions to this.
6
band
Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It's argued that government should invest in railways instead of roads. Some people could think that railways are essential, while others may believe otherwise. I completely agree with this point of view, because rail lines are more environmentally friendly and they could prevent traffic congestion.

“Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer”

Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their familles but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people believe the government spends too much money on space research while there are still a lot of problems on the Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

In many countries, the number of animals and plant declining? Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?