The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

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letter to bring your kind attention to me and my neighbours

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been facing

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problems because the garbage collection system in my local area is not working properly. To be more precise,

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rubbish collectors regularly come and

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the garbage twice a week

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time, now they pick

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rubbish once a week since

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month.

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, there

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no adequate

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of dustbins in our region,

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, existing dustbins were overflowed with litter and even we can get

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bad smells even from our houses.

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, it is really not good for the environment as it allows insects to breed and causes contagious diseases. I would like to suggest some things to improve the system.

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, new trash bins will be added

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our location to avoid overflowing with trash.

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, garbagemen will need to pick up garbage at least twice a week regularly in order to get

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healthy environment. I hope my suggestion will be valuable and

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issue will be resolved soon. Yours sincerely, Sandar

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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