With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of doing this?

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It is known, nowadays, that population growth leads to the problem that some people around the

world

suffer from a lack of food. Genetically modified

foods

seem to be a good alternative to normal

foods

, and

therefore

, could stop worldwide starvation. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of using

foods

. On the one hand,

such

alternatives as

foods

do not require killing

animals

. Killing

animals

used to be the only way to survive for humankind in the past;

however

, throughout evolution, people found other sources of food like protein-containing plants and mushrooms.

Moreover

, a big part of vegetarians and vegans claim that killing

animals

is immoral in the modern

world

, and should be completely banned. According to my own experience, I saw how farmers killed poor

animals

and used their bodies for

further

sales. That's why,

foods

seem to be a good replacement, which does not force people to kill

animals

On the other hand

, our

world

is not completely ready for

foods

. It is proven that using genetically modified

foods

is much more expensive than using normal

foods

In addition

, new fabrics should be built and deployed around the

world

, which

also

requires big money.

For instance

, Kazakhstan was passionate to replace farms with

fabrics;

however

, it turned out that every

foods

fabric needed a huge budget, and

therefore

this

project failed due to financial problems in Kazakhstan at those times. In conclusion, I would say that focussing on producing more

foods

is a debatable idea.

Thus

, despite obvious advantages like stopping killing

animals

, we still have a problem with expensive

foods

fabrics .

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