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With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of doing this?

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It is known, nowadays, that population growth leads to the problem that some people around the
world
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 suffer from a lack of food. Genetically modified
foods
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 seem to be a good alternative to normal
foods
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, and
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, could stop worldwide starvation. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of using
GM
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foods
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. On the one hand,
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 alternatives as
GM
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foods
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 do not require killing
animals
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. Killing
animals
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 used to be the only way to survive for humankind in the past;
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, throughout evolution, people found other sources of food like protein-containing plants and mushrooms.
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, a big part of vegetarians and vegans claim that killing
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 is immoral in the modern
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, and should be completely banned. According to my own experience, I saw how farmers killed poor
animals
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 and used their bodies for
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 sales. That's why,
GM
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foods
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 seem to be a good replacement, which does not force people to kill
animals
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.
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, our
world
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 is not completely ready for
GM
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foods
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. It is proven that using genetically modified
foods
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 is much more expensive than using normal
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.
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, new fabrics should be built and deployed around the
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, which
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 requires big money.
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, Kazakhstan was passionate to replace farms with
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 fabrics;
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, it turned out that every
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foods
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 fabric needed a huge budget, and
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,
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 project failed due to financial problems in Kazakhstan at those times. In conclusion, I would say that focussing on producing more
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foods
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 is a debatable idea.
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, despite obvious advantages like stopping killing
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, we still have a problem with expensive
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foods
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 fabrics .

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