How has the modern eating habits changed? Discuss it's influence on our generation?

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Eating is an essential part of life. Eating habits in

current

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the current

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period

does

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have

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apply

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considerable change compared

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civilization

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. Food is fuel for our body without which we become inactive or malnourished. In my opinion, modern cuisine has more detrimental effects on our

health

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than

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period.

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with, ancient people used to consume raw and fresh meals. The vegetables and meats in

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days were free of pollution and

environmental

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hazardous

chemicals

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leading to good

health

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and

greater

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lifespan.

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nowdays

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everyone has awareness of

food

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the food

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they consume.

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, most

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the

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apply

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people look

the

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minerals and vitamins list per serving in every processed

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before they eat.

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is because most of our plants and animals are impacted

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pollution.

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leading to some vitamin deficiency. And to supplement

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deficiency doctor

advices

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advises

us to take

diet

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supplement tablets. There are some benefits in

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modern

mordern

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modern

cuisine

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as it is available ready-made. The time

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for

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cooking is less so that we can spend our valuable time and effort in other areas of our daily activity.

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, we can get a check on what we consume. Today I can eat

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which is

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source

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protein

protien

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protein

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tomorrow

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tomorrow

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bit of Vitamin B complex. So we can see how much we intake and keep a check on our

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. In spite of

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benefits

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there are more demerits in current cuisine. Studies show that more than millions of people

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health

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problems with

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daily food habits. The

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problem may vary from minor to major illness.

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can happen with or without our knowledge.

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, daily intake of Junk foods can cause cancer, obesity and diabetes. These

health

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ailments can

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be caused by pollution. The best example could be the preservation

chemicals

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like wax coated on foods like

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and

yam

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. These

chemicals

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are used to preserve

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apply

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vegetables for

long

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time. Eventually, to sum up, the contemporary

diet

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that we consume has more detrimental impacts

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our

body

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bodies

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compared to

old

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the old

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diet

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. So I could recommend

to cook

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cooking

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ourself

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ourselves

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to reduce the effect of harmful

chemicals

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and to live a safe and happy life.

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How has the modern eating habits changed? Discuss it's influence on our generation?

Your opinion

People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulosry part of high school programmes. To wat extent do you agree or disagree?

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction, causing high levels of water and air pollution. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, women never feel need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?