How has the modern eating habits changed? Discuss it's influence on our generation?
Eating is an essential part of life. Eating habits in
current
period Correct article usage
the current
does
have Correct subject-verb agreement
do
a
considerable change compared Correct article usage
apply
ancient
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to ancient
civilization
. Food is fuel for our body without which we become inactive or malnourished. In my opinion, modern cuisine has more detrimental effects on our Fix the agreement mistake
civilizations
health
than early
period.
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the early
To begin
with, ancient people used to consume raw and fresh meals. The vegetables and meats in early
days were free of pollution and Correct article usage
the early
environmental
hazardous Change the adjective
environmentally
chemicals
. Thus
leading to good health
and greater
lifespan. Correct article usage
a greater
However
, nowdays
everyone has awareness of Correct the word
nowadays
food
they consume. Correct article usage
the food
For instance
, most of
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apply
the
people look Correct article usage
apply
the
minerals and vitamins list per serving in every processed Change preposition
at the
diet
before they eat. This
is because most of our plants and animals are impacted with
pollution. Change preposition
by
Thus
leading to some vitamin deficiency. And to supplement this
deficiency doctor advices
us to take Correct your spelling
advises
diet
supplement tablets.
There are some benefits in Correct your spelling
modern
mordern
cuisine Correct your spelling
modern
such
as it is available ready-made. The time spend
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spent
for
cooking is less so that we can spend our valuable time and effort in other areas of our daily activity. Change preposition
on
For example
, we can get a check on what we consume. Today I can eat dish
which is Correct article usage
a dish
high
source Add an article
the high
a high
on
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of
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protein
protien
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protein
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tomorrow
tommorrow
I can have Correct your spelling
tomorrow
little
bit of Vitamin B complex. So we can see how much we intake and keep a check on our Add an article
a little
diet
.
In spite of above
Correct article usage
the above
benefits
there are more demerits in current cuisine. Studies show that more than millions of people Add a comma
,benefits
has
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have
health
problems with our
daily food habits. The Correct pronoun usage
their
health
problem may vary from minor to major illness. This
can happen with or without our knowledge. For instance
, daily intake of Junk foods can cause cancer, obesity and diabetes. These health
ailments can also
be caused by pollution. The best example could be the preservation chemicals
like wax coated on foods like apple
and Fix the agreement mistake
apples
yam
. These Fix the agreement mistake
yams
chemicals
are used to preserve the
vegetables for Correct article usage
apply
long
time.
Eventually, to sum up, the contemporary Change the article
a long
diet
that we consume has more detrimental impacts to
our Change preposition
on
body
compared to Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
old
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the old
diet
. So I could recommend to cook
by Change the verb form
cooking
ourself
to reduce the effect of harmful Correct pronoun usage
ourselves
chemicals
and to live a safe and happy life.Submitted by suruthi25 on
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