Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home, what is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?.

Teenagers face some
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in school and at home.
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this
essay will discuss how can parents provide
this
issue and what is the reason. On the one hand, during adolescence, there
are
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under
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pressure from all sides.
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, too many extra lessons by teachers. There are so many obstacles in the school. Teenagers have to deal with them and they have to reach
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. The
first
reason, they do not like to struggle with
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issue
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.
Therefore
, most of them always want help from family.
Also
, they hesitate in
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a future profession.
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, one of my friends,
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hesitated to designate her major and was depressed. Her relatives
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advised her based on her interests.
Furthermore
, a to solution
this
problem is to provide the school and parents should
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based on the kid's interests.
On the other hand
,
family
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the family
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should
responsible
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their
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offspring. They face not only disagreements with peers, but
also
during the transition to a new life,
adolescence
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surface to different challenges.
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, when I was
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teenager, I was stubborn and did not want to talk
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, I could not talk anyone
my
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secrets,
as
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for family should be friends with their kids because it helps them share their troubles. Family should spend more time with their children and take care of them responsibly. In conclusion, it is true that the young generation has a lot of
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such
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in
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the
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educational status and home climate. I personally believe,
household
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and
academy
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academies
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should support
young
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the young
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generation.
As a result
,
to
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kids
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confidence
growth
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and solves effectively.
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