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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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some people that specialists,
such
 as doctors and engineers, should be obligated to labour in the country where they got educated to
work
 as them.
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 reason for
that is
 there are some countries that lack those professionals, even though they educate individuals to become them.
However
, others think that they should have free choice on the location of their workplace. That way, it gives freedom and units can freely choose the most fitting countries and locations to
work
 in.
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 connected to the insufficient number of specialists listed above that
work
 in poorer,
although
 highly educated countries.
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 educated doctor, after spending some much time on
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 will look for the most beneficial money-wise place for him. So if his country is not offering the highest wages he will move to a richer one to earn more.
For example
, statistics show that many young doctors from Poland that
also
 graduated from medical studies in Poland
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 are often looking for a job in Germany, as it offers them more attractive contracts. That situation results in a serious deficit of medical specialists in Poland.
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 point of view is quite opposite as people that think the other way around, claim that workers can not be held against their will in any country. Forcing employees to
work
 in
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 place
that is
 not desirable for them is making them much less efficient.
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, engineers that
work
 on projects that are not interesting
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 them will
also
 put much less effort into completing them, resulting in more time spent on constructing. In my opinion, I think the
second
 statement is more valid, as people that enjoy and are fulfilled with their
work
 will give a much better outcome.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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