You work for an international company.You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager.In letter •describe the training course you want to do •explain what the company could do help you •say how the course will be useful for job

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for the manager in your international company.I hope you will look into
this
letter. Let's talk about the
course
,I
want
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want to
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go to Programming and IT subjects are taught in the
course
.The
course
is held 3 times a week,from 8:00 a.m to 10:00 a.m.The
course
includes 1 theoretical and 2 practical lessons.The
course
has all the amenities in and pay my salary in advance.
Also
, the
course
is very useful for my work.Because, since my work is mainly in computer and IT field and the additional
course
will enhance my skills.In the future, open a
course
outside of work,I want to share my knowledge with young workers. I look forward hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Xudoyberdiyeva Sevinch
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task achievement
Ensure that you clearly explain the training course and how it specifically benefits your role. The content of the course should be more detailed, meaning what exact programming and IT subjects will be covered.
coherence cohesion
Divide your content into clearer paragraphs, each focusing solely on one main idea. This will improve the overall flow and readability of your letter.
task achievement
Include details on how you expect the company to support you financially or logistically during the training period.
writing tone
Formal tone is maintained throughout the letter, which is appropriate for a professional setting.
writing tone
The use of polite language for requesting and concluding the letter is well done.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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