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A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/She has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter 1. Describe why you think he/she will enjoy it 2. Explain why you recommend studying at your university 3. give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear_________,

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Dear Martin, I'm glad to hear you again, before these two long years, of course, I want to show you all about our beautiful country and our education system. When I hear about your idea of studying in Colombia, I felt so good
also
 excited to help you on
this
 amazing road,
however
, don't forget the actual situation in my country is not the same as the United States, hear the public universities how you like, the access is the hardest part of all, anyway, you have a high level in the engineering field, I know and
that is
 no problem for you. On
other
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, I recommend you
this
 institution because is the best university in my country,
has
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 great quality and international awards, specifically in Electronic Engineering, and
also
 in Telecommunications Networks,
as a result
 of all that for me is the best way to improve your carrier. When you want to apply, let me know because I have an excellent method to take the three main exams, I'll teach you how to approve everyone. Don't worry about that, I'll support you all the time. To sum up, with my help your process will be successful. Best Wishes,  Eduardo
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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