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Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree?

#students #school #university #lessons #teachers #sources #television #internet
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Education is one of the most important problems that many
people
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 face.
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, whether or not
people
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 should study in
school
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 through
lessons
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 with their
teachers
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 is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I believe that
people
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 can learn more knowledge than from
lessons
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. It is obvious that with developed technology, distance learning is becoming more comfortable and convenient. That means
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 have different choices and make different decisions.
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, students can learn knowledge through an internet app, television, or online
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.
People
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 who choose their subjects freely can improve their academic performance due to the fact that they will focus on their interests and be willing to spend more time on them. Good
skills
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 and experience can
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 help them find a job in the future.
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, learning from other resources is better than
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 with their
teachers
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.
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,
people
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 who study in
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 and learn subjects from their
lessons
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 will feel bored,
although
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 their
teachers
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 try to explain the knowledge very clearly. Sometimes, some
skills
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 in
school
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 are outdated.
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, nowadays, CNC machine
skills
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 are very popular all over the world, but a student who learned them in
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 is still taught how to control traditional machines. These
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 that students learned mean wasting time.
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, students' learning
skills
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 via the internet can broaden their horizons; they have the opportunity to touch wide resources, have a chance to learn the newest technology even learn with different
teachers
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. These can help
people
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 get more benefits. In conclusion, the disadvantages of learning resources from
lessons
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 outweigh the advantages. I believe that it is a trend that distance learning will replace traditional education.
Submitted by kevin. B on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized feedback
  • guidance
  • interactive learning environments
  • discussions
  • group work
  • hands-on activities
  • retention of knowledge
  • passive consumption
  • digital sources
  • emotional support
  • motivation
  • vast array of information
  • proliferation of resources
  • supplement traditional lessons
  • self-directed learning
  • independence
  • critical thinking skills
  • multimedia tools
  • videos
  • podcasts
  • interactive simulations
  • learning styles
  • engaging
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