Some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . discuss both the views and give your opinion?

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paper will discuss the two schools of thought referred to

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. One school thinks that publicity is still one of the best mass media to influence individuals to buy things. The opposite school says that advertisement is no longer what

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used to be, now being so common that people do not look at them.

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, behind an appealing ad, there is always creativity and innovation.

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is possible because there is a team in each company whose only task is to think about how to introduce the products in the changing society. Specifically,

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group is referred to as the marketing department which always discusses how to attract individuals.

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, Coca-Cola has been very good at convincing people to continue purchasing

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original products after a hundred years. Recently Christmas TV commercials showed that you can buy a can with your name, making it attractive to individuals to purchase it.

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, it is true that sometimes, over the years, the adverts of some products have not changed and it becomes repetitive and stale.

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, advertising shows up at the wrong moment and makes people annoyed.

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, in Spain when you are watching a movie or a series on television, there are breaks for adverts.

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situation can make the public end up changing the way they feel about the product because it interrupts the movie or series. In conclusion, I consider that advertising is constantly improving and new strategies are increasing. We are around advertisements unconsciously.

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, there is some advertisement on TV that are not interactive with the public.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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Some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . discuss both the views and give your opinion?

Your opinion

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