You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to complain about the issues I am facing with my present sharing accommodation. It has been 3 weeks since I shifted to the hostel

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. The

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number is 205 and is situated on the 2nd floor at the end of the corridor. I am sharing

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with another student called Lincy. She is my senior who studies in the Arts Department. I am extremely disappointed with my current

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arrangement.

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, my roommate is a bit loud and eccentric.

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, she loves playing music at night.

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, I am having disturbed sleep and I am not able to focus on my work. I have tried to raise my concern to her, but all in vain.

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, I humbly request that you shift me to another

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with a

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partner who is not so loud and who is an introvert like me. I have my exams scheduled

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week and would highly appreciate it if I can shift before that. Looking forward to your prompt response. Regards Jessy

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
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share a room
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