You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the issues I am facing with my present sharing accommodation. It has been 3 weeks since I shifted to the hostel

room

. The

room

number is 205 and is situated on the 2nd floor at the end of the corridor. I am sharing

this

room

with another student called Lincy. She is my senior who studies in the Arts Department. I am extremely disappointed with my current

room

arrangement.

Firstly

, my roommate is a bit loud and eccentric.

Moreover

, she loves playing music at night.

As a result

, I am having disturbed sleep and I am not able to focus on my work. I have tried to raise my concern to her, but all in vain.

Secondly

, I humbly request that you shift me to another

room

with a

room

partner who is not so loud and who is an introvert like me. I have my exams scheduled

week and would highly appreciate it if I can shift before that. Looking forward to your prompt response. Regards Jessy

Submitted by MarshJess on Tue Nov 08 2022

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