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The development o f tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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The diagram illustrates the
growth
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rate
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 of Gross Domestic Products for three different countries, namely
Tunisia
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,
Japan
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, and
Ecuador
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 between 2007 and 2010. Overall, the
GDP
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 of
Japan
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 grew statically during the
period
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, while that of
Tunisia
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 witnessed the opposite trend.
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, The
GDP
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 of
Ecuador
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 saw both periods of rise and fall. In the
first
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 half of the
period
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,
Japan
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's
GDP
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 grew consistently throughout the
period
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, while that of
Tunisia
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 plummeted in 2008, growing at nearly 4.50
percent
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 yearly.
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, the
growth
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rate
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 of
Ecuador
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 skyrocketed in 2008 before declining in 2009, with a
growth
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rate
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 of 5
percent
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 annually. In the
second
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 half of the
period
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, the
GDP
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growth
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rate
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 of
Ecuador
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 fell sharply in 2009 before rising again in 2010, while that of
Japan
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 rose marginally in 2010, achieving a
growth
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rate
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 of approximately 5.20
percent
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 annually.
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, the
growth
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rate
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 pertaining to
Tunisia
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 was almost consistent during the
period
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 in question.
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