Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have caused many deaths and injure injuries. Some people think that if the

government

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 increase increases the minimum legal age for driving,

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road safety will be improve improved. I disagree with the opinion and 

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 I consider that some more significant policies leading to safety should be set by the

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there is an element of truth in the opinion, as the impulse younger invariably

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faster than the steady older indeed, 

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 is a mere partial reason giving rise to the

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. 

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, if the

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 increase increases the minimum legal age for driving cars, it will cause those who should have had

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to drive 

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one, which will make cause trouble for them in daily 

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 life. On one hand, 

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 I think the

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should extend the time when the learners are trained in driving school to improve their driving skill skills, for better driving skill skills will make them become more experienced. Needless to say, the more experienced the drivers are the fewer the

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will occur, which 

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 has been confirmed by experts from 

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 the

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 department. 

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, if emergency circumstance circumstances happened on 

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 the motorway, a new driver would bewilder, contributing to a terrible

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. On 

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 the other hand, the

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should set

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policy to limit tired driving severely, for the reason that according to the statistics almost

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 accident 

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 happening on highway highways were caused by the exhausted driver who had been steering several for several hours. 

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 example, a person having driven three hours must come to a halt for a rest and a trucker cannot drive on highway the highway after 3 am. I think the road 

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 safety will improve if these policies are launched by the

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