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Telephones should be banned from secondary schools agree or disagree with reasons

Nowadays, most parents let their children bring telephones to
school
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, which makes them feel safer meanwhile they are not right
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, others consider that the urban ministry should avoid
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 permit because it may distract a lot of
students
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 from concentrating in classes.
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, safety is always one of the most important factors when
students
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 carry their phones with them.
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, according to research from the Bejing police department, there were more than 1000 cases of kidnapping in 2019 in
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 area. When the children finish
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 middle time or lunchtime, most of them prefer to spend time in local coffee shops to have a quick snack before coming back to the
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 period.
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, if the kids are strictly not allowed to bring telephones with them, it will become a great opportunity for bad people to spy and cause illegal problems.
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, in some emergency situations,
students
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 can contact their parents when the counsellors or the supervisors are not right
them
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with them
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 beside.
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 contemporary world today, it is partially difficult for teachers to guide their pupils without using phones totally. Most educators assume that allowing offspring to use their technology devices for lessons is actually necessary. To illustrate
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 convenience, the majority like to give more knowledgeable sources from worldwide while they are in open lessons, so they can ask the children to search in Google, Wikipedia, and so on their own phones to support their research. To conclude
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, I don't think banning phone usage in high
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 is necessary because most educational supervisors still need help from technology to protect
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, and support their lessons.
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,
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 can do more harm than good if the teachers carelessly let their kids use telephones so much at
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besides
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 learning.

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