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People are of the opinion that children’s behavior should be controlled by their parents and teachers. Others do believe that children should be free to do as they like. Discuss both views and state your opinion

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From the opinion of one side of the community, it's said that the demeanour of their little ones should be under the influence of their parents and mentors,whereas others are sure that children should have freedom of action. I strongly believe that children must be brought up under the control of their elder ones,as a matter of some features like not being enough experienced and knowing too little about things around them.
To begin
 with, people,generally,are of the view that controlling a child
that is
 what makes them get rid of their willings,
however
, parents might help them to choose a better way of accomplishing their desires.
For example
,Mostly,children,from an early age,are interested in team sports
such
 as football,basketball etc,and even so,they often play it, it's hard to understand their own mistakes and to correct them on their own,in order to evolve their skills,while their mentors are able to make notices and find an appropriate approach to improve their abilities in ease.
Secondly
,by monitoring little ones, elder community members can share their life experiences and knowledge.
For instance
,a child may be provided with physical and mental help or advice on how to deal with bullying when a child doesn't have any idea what to do.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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