While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devasting impact on our world. Discuss both vies and give your opinion.
There are quite a lot of world issues that nations all around the world are dealing with, while global warming and deforestation are considered the most important problems.
Although
the increased temperature of the world is known as a detrimental factor by many individuals, other groups argue that deforestation would be more dangerous for all living creatures.
It is said that the transportation systems make up a large proportion of Linking Words
climate
change that obviously can lead to a higher temperature. For more explanation, citizens’ excessive reliance on using their own vehicles Use synonyms
instead
of the public transport system causes more carbon dioxide to be produced. Linking Words
As a result
, these hazardous pollutants are trapped in the atmosphere, Linking Words
then
it has been proven that the mentioned phenomenon is a key factor in Linking Words
climate
change. Use synonyms
In addition
, when inhabitants’ tendency to get to their destination by trains, busses, or taxis is decreased, the fossil fuel demands will be enhanced during the time by solo drivers. Linking Words
For example
, in the capital city of Iran which is called Tehran, there is a fact that the more masses choose private cars to reach work the more environmental issues including air pollution, traffic congestion Linking Words
climate
warming they facing with. So, increasing nations' awareness about some of the obvious harmful consequences of their choices would be efficient.
Defrustration is another global issue Use synonyms
that is
a result of the jungle’s destruction by humans. To explain more, the unique vegetation of one area provides it with many benefits Linking Words
such
as oxygen generation and water conservation. in fact, the destruction of jungles poses both human and animal life in danger by reducing abilities in carbon dioxide absorption. it is not surprising that trees have a considerable role in air regulation which is breathed by live creatures, Linking Words
then
, the number of trees contributes to Linking Words
climate
change. As an example, in some cities in Iran Use synonyms
such
as Tehran Linking Words
that is
mentioned before, lack of vegetation and mismanagement to find a suitable solution are other reasons that people are suffering from many natural disasters. Linking Words
Therefore
, tree planting should be done and encouraged by the government.
To conclude, fast-paced life incites people to use their private cars Linking Words
instead
of an environmentally-friendly mode of transport, and pay less attention to the destruction of natural resources, because of which plating programs and more comfortable public transportation should be provided by authorities.Linking Words
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