Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A proportion of the public believes that

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should take responsibility for their children's criminal actions and that they must be punished

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. I agree with

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statement

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because criminals, commit crimes because they can'

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recognize what is right or what is wrong

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except for

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a population of criminals who had

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, but for these groups,

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that their juveniles' had broken mental health. Civilization was created by people from the

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known centuries and in present days human beings need to be educated for being adapted to modern life

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teachings start from the

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hour after they are born. As an ancestor,

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must teach life basics to their

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juvenile

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juveniles

and these life basics are walking, speaking, eating, protecting from dangers and even include having good habits. Children who don'

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know what is wrong, tend to commit crimes as soon as they are able,considering their irrepressible urge which comes from animal

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. For example, the serial killer Jeffry Dahmer grew up in a careless family and he thinks that

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killing a man in order to make love is a normal habit so he started to kill at an early age.

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, some people commit crimes because they are impulsive because

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their mental disorder and their brain can'

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work as an average human brain. Some of them hear noises inside

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had ordering them to kill or feel excited about killing

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as mentioned killer Mr Dahmer. Considering that, he might be suffering from a mental disorder and he told

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in his inquiry, what he feels while he was killing, but we can'

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know if it is true or not because the judge from his case decided to turn his brain into ashes before examination considering his dirty legacy.

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, if his mother and father had a quality connection with him during his childhood years, they could have understood

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wrong with him deep inside, and they could take action to solve his problems as a precaution. To sum up,

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not only must teach their

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what is good or bad but

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they must observe their kids to solve their bad habits or impulses problems to create a nice participant in society from

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