Using social media as Facebook, Twitter is replacing face to face communication in this century. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the
last
century, social
media
is chosen by people rather than old-school face-to-face
communication
with each other. To consider that, the advantages
such
as being connected easily and faster could be more beneficial than the disadvantages
such
as losing emotions in written letters and the affordable adaptation for some people. The advanced technology
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creates a new age which has some differences from the
last
one including more 'sharing' and' the sharing age' name given by society to it. These developments offer to the public online
communication
. In the present day, the biggest proportion of society has one or more social
media
account
such
as Facebook, Twitter or WhatsApp but some of them create their accounts just for being kept up with others with an improved Internet background.
Moreover
, online
communication
provides to people share their ideas with just one click and it happens within seconds.
On the other hand
, transferring ideas and emotions via social
media
cause some mean losing problems because these platforms include written messages and the biggest difference is the receivers can't understand exactly what they want to tell without facial and body movements.
Furthermore
, using the Internet for being in contact couldn't be suitable for everyone especially the elderly ones in the public. Some of them might have struggled with adapting to developed technology by difficulties
such
as eye disorders or they just find it weird because they never experiment similar with it. To sum up, social
media
still had problems
such
as adaptation issues and losing emotions which should be solved before replacing with face to face
communication
but ,eventually would be replaced because the public tends to use it with the increased population in social
media
and the biggest advantage is saving time with improved technology.
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