Because many problems we face today affect our whole planet, good relationships between countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Globalization in the
last
century brought all the
nations
of
this
world close and made them dependable on each other. Every
country
relies on other
countries
for resources and products that they don't have available in their own
country
. In modern days no
nation
can survive for a long with a bad accord with other
countries
. It's very important for every
country
to have a good
relationship
with others
countries
because it's in their own interest. A good rapport and alliance make trade and commerce easy for them and at favourable prices which will eventually impact their economy in a positive way. The citizens of a
country
which has good relations with other
nations
enjoy more amenities and better work and lifestyle. Their life is more stable and peaceful and they can easily travel to other
nations
without any major issues. In the case of an emergency, a
nation
with good allies can count on other
nations
for help. For emergencies
such
as earthquakes, floods or drought they can get the required help, financially and professionally from other
nations
. Everyone wants to be in a good
relationship
with a good
nation
but some
countries
don't care about what's good and what's bad. They are more focused on the interest of their own people for which they become allies of bad and powerful
countries
. Having a good
relationship
with a powerful
nation
may offer many advantages like getting petrol or gas at a discounted price to the rest of the world. Many
countries
like India are currently trading with Russia while most of Europe is against and sanctioning Russia after they declared the war on Ukraine. India made many deals with Russia which helped them get Crude oil at a discounted price. Indian ministers did what was good for their
nation
and people and managed to control the price of Petrol and Diesel while in Europe the rate of Petrol and Diesel increased by 70% leading to a surge in inflation. At the
last
, who defines what's good and what's bad? it's everyone's point of view. A good
relationship
with other
countries
is essential for every
country
. A
country
must do what's in the interest of its people and
also
try to balance the thing with the rest of the world.
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