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In some viewpoints, the
Olympics
 serve as a platform for bringing different nations together,
while
 in others, the
Olympics
 are nothing more than a waste of
money
 that could be put toward solving more pressing problems. The
Olympic
Games
, from my perspective, are not a waste of
money
 and contribute significantly to the unity of nations around the world, despite a large amount of
money
 being spent on them. Several communities consider the affairs a waste of funds. A noticeable reason is that contributing to
Olympic
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Games
 might be a financial burden for some underdeveloped
countries
. As a participating
country
, a massive amount of
money
 is required to spend on the food, transportation and accommodation of the sportspersons taking part in the competition. The worst scenario is when an underdeveloped
country
 hosts the event when citizens are in
a
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poor living
condition
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conditions
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, Hosting
Olympics
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the Olympics
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 might cost a great deal of the nation's annual income and leave the citizens in poorer conditions, when in fact the
money
 could be spent on improving their lives. In one respect, the
Olympic
 Committee should consider the financial situation of the host
country
 to prevent
such
 a situation; in another respect, the
money
 invested in
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Olympics
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Olympic
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Games
 will lead to certain economic benefits for most
countries
. To illustrate, during the
Games
, the government can generate revenue through selling global television broadcasting rights, sponsor investments, ticket selling and
Olympic
 souvenirs; after the
Games
, the arenas can be used as infrastructure to improve the quality of life of the residents and provide them with convenience in life. Others,
however
, view the
Olympics
 as a forum for strengthening bonds and brotherhood among people around the world.
Firstly
, the
Olympic
Games
provides
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 an opportunity for the participating
countries
 to interact and establish a relationship. As opposed to official global events held in meeting rooms, the
Olympic
Games
 provides one of the few informal and free
environment
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 for players and leaders from different
countries
 to exchange ideas and views.
Additionally
, it serves as a platform for cultural exchange. During the competition, athletes have the opportunity to experience the culture and traditions of the host
country
 firsthand, and by sharing these on social media, people around the world can
also
 get a taste of the most authentic culture around.
Overall
, despite a large outlay of funds to organize the event, most costs can be recovered in various ways, and the
Olympics
 still serve as a catalyst for global harmony and unity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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